So you’ve finished your college essay and you think it’s actually pretty good. You’re telling a story about yourself and you’re pleased with the message. You’ve read it over, edited it and are feeling confident. Before you hit submit, make sure you’ve double checked that your essay is as clear, poignant and powerful as you think it is. All too often, we don’t realize how flawed our own writing can really be, especially in the case of this milestone admissions essay.
With these 5 simple techniques, you can rest assured that your college essay will showcase your story effectively.
Read it aloud, record it and listen to it.
Creating a compelling essay is extremely time consuming. This is especially true for one as important as your college admissions essay. Sometimes you spend so much time writing that you lose track of keeping your piece coherent. Hearing your work read aloud takes you out of the writer’s chair and gives you a chance to think critically about your piece as a whole. So use your phone to record yourself reading it aloud, and then, as painful as it may be, sit and listen to your own rendition with a red pen in hand. Any awkward prose choices, unnecessary repetition or tonal irregularities are easily spotted using this technique.
Have a stranger read it.
Telling a story takes a lot of effort. To you, the story is so clear – you’re living it every day and it’s rooted in all of your past experiences. However, many facets of your story may not be so readily apparent to the outside reader. We may think we are painting a clear picture with our writing, but sometimes we may not realize that the full story doesn’t always make it onto the page. They may need some added context to fully grasp what you are trying to say. Allowing someone who is completely unfamiliar with you and your personality to read your essay can help fill in any gaps in your narrative. The right person will be able to give you feedback about what isn’t clear, impactful or effective. Forums such as College Confidential are great for anonymous and honest feedback. Writing tutors, whether at your peer writing center or professional, are also a great resource for feedback on general narrative flow and comprehensiveness.
Have someone who knows you better than you know yourself read it.
While having an impartial editor read your paper is great, allowing someone who knows you well to take a pass at your story is equally as important. Someone who has a perspective on your journey can help fill in certain gaps you may have missed in your effort to build your narrative. Moreover, sometimes these sources are able clue us in on important observations that we may not see ourselves. Does the story you’re telling showcase the real you? Does it weave together formative experiences, real traits and values to form a compelling and truthful portrait? Close friends, relatives, academic mentors and even coaches are invaluable resources for our personal narrative.
It’s, yours and who’s?
Grammar is one of the most important parts of any piece of writing. Without proper grammar, an entire narrative can fall apart. Make sure your “yours,” “its” and “who/whoms” are used correctly. Your admissions essay is your personal recollection of your pre-college growth. It should be engaging as well as professional. Nothing ruins a great story more quickly than poor grammar. Your essay may sound great but it also needs to look great.
Print it out, don’t look at it for 24 hours and then edit on paper.
When we spend a long time with a document, we stop seeing what’s really on the page and start seeing what we think is on the page. You may have edited your paper five times, but still have missed that one misplaced comma or used “it’s” instead of “its” because your mind is simply glossing over it. So, give yourself a little space from your essay. Take a full 24 hour breather from it: no writing, no editing, no nothing. Then print it out and read it over with a pen in hand. You may be shocked to find how many mistakes you find (and fix!).
Your college admissions essay is an important piece of your application. It gives your prospective university a true glimpse of what makes you who you are. With these five steps in mind, you can turn any rough draft into a polished final product ready for submission. Happy writing!